WRITING

We have been learning to write persuasive arguments.  We are getting really good at stating our opinion and then supporting it with significant ideas.  We are beginning to add detail to our ideas too.  Here is some of our best writing -

SMOKING SHOULD BE BANNED

Smoking can make you very sick.  So sick, that your lungs wont work properly, because it puts bad things into your lungs that can kill you.

You should not have started smoking in the first place, if you didn't want to die.  You could have lived a lot longer you know. 

Smoking should be banned in NZ, because too many kiwis are dying too young. 

By Jordan